Anatomy of the Novel - Susan DeFreitas

You could spend $40K on an MFA—and hundreds more on books on craft—and still be in the dark with your novel.

Or you could work with me for four weeks and nail it.

Where: Online

When: September 5–30, 2022

Enrollment: 16

Pre-sell Price: $625 ($700 after June 22, 2022) SOLD OUT!

It’s a dirty little secret in the writing world: you can rack up $40K+ on an MFA, and/or read 40+ books on craft, and still have no idea how to write a publishable novel.

That’s because creative writing programs generally focus on the short story, which is easier to workshop—and because when most authors teach, whether in person or through their books on craft, they tend to teach their own method and structure, which may or may not work for you.

If you’re tired of wondering what you’re doing—and, frankly, tired of the BS—pull up a chair, crack open your laptop, and prepare yourself for a serious download. In the course of just four weeks, you’ll learn the fundamental principles of publishable fiction, regardless of genre, and gain the tools to recognize when your novel meets the standards of the marketplace. Period.

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Frequently Asked Questions

This course was designed for novelists and aspiring novelists with a work-in-progress that is still in the developmental stage (meaning, you're still working on the story, not just tinkering with the prose).

Are you a pantser?

The framework I share in this course offers ample room for improvisation and discovery--and it will save you from spending years of your life on a manuscript that's never going to sell.

Are you a plotter?

The framework I share in this course will synthesize the various story structures you've studied into something a whole lot simpler, a whole lot clearer, and a whole lot more flexible than anything else you have seen before, gauranteed. (It will also keep you from making the sort of mistakes that result from going "by the book" with elements of structure that don't actually work for your novel.)

Are you planning or drafting a new novel?

This course will save you at least one complete revision--if not 2 or 3. In all likelihood, we're talking years of your life here (not to mention a whole lot of frustration and hair-pulling).

Are you headed into a developmental revision?

This course will help you see the forest for the trees, and focus on exactly what it will take to nail that story--stem to stern--in your next revision.

Are you 100 percent sure of your story, and just want feedback on your execution?

This course isn't for you.

Are you looking for someone who will hand you industry connections and introduce you to all of their agent friends?

This course isn't for you.

Are you looking for someone to actually coach you in writing your novel?

This course isn't for you. (That said, if you're interested in working with a book coach, doing this coursework first will put you in excellent shape to make the most of that sort of coaching.)

This course is appropriate for writers at all levels.

Are you just starting out with long-form fiction?

This course will give you a solid grounding in the basics, and cut through the bewildering barrage of conflicting info you'll find on the internet (and, honestly, in most creative writing programs).

Are you a seasoned pro, with multiple published novels under your belt?

This course will cut through the BS in what you've been taught (if you have an MFA), give you a real method for your own madness (if you've been flying by the seat of your pants, in terms of structure) and save you TONS of time in revision.

This course is designed to give you two key things:

1. A fundamentally sound outline for your novel (meaning, one that is propulsive, emotionally compelling, and, ultimately, marketable).

2. A fundamentally sound education in the structure of long-form fiction (a.k.a., what I WISH I'd gotten in the course of my MFA).

The framework I teach in Anatomy of the Novel is based on my popular Outline Coaching program--a program that has consistently produced such amazing results that I now require all new clients to start off with it when they sign on with me as a book coach.

I've worked with hundreds of clients on this structure, and I can say from experience that it WORKS. (You can check out some of the testimonials on this below.) This framework tames the most unruly of plots, crystallizes the most amorphous of ideas, and generates meaning and depth in any fictional narrative, regardless of genre.

And most importantly, it meets the demands of the marketplace for long-form fiction.

This framework draws from:

Three-Act Structure
Four-Act Structure
The Hero's Journey
Freitag's Pyramid
The "Save the Cat" Beat Sheet
The work of Lisa Cron, author of Wired for Story and Story Genius
Jennie Nash's Inside Outline

Beyond that, it is based, first and foremost, on my own overwhelming frustration with the way long-form fiction is taught in MFA programs--or, more accurately, NOT taught in MFA programs, which tend to privilege the short story form.

When I graduated with my MFA and went to work as a editor-for-hire with an agency back in 2009, I couldn't just "swipe left" on manuscripts that didn't work, the way acquisitions editors and agents do--I had to actually figure out WHY they weren't working, and what would address these issues I was seeing. I also got to see the authors' revisions, based on my feedback--so I got to see whether the strategies I was recommending actually worked.

The framework I teach in this course is based on my 12+ years of experience as an editor and book coach, my study of (just about) every story structure under the sun, and my own experience as a working novelist.

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Covered in this course

Week One: Character

Character is the muscular system of the novel—the part of the story that defines its shape, sets it in motion, and, ultimately, makes it feel real. Topics covered in week one of this course include:

Why character arc is THE key to connecting with your reader and making them care about what happens in the story
Your protagonist’s backstory and internal issue
Problems, obstacles, and changes
Climax—the moment of truth
The “inside game,” and why it’s critical to creating an emotional experience for your reader
Best practices for POV

Week Two: Plot

Plot is the skeletal structure of your novel, and it’s not just a series of events—it’s a series of events that connect via the articulation of cause and effect, giving the novel a solid, workable structure. Topics covered in this week of the program include:

Ground situation and exposition
Plot points and reversals
Tension and stakes
Plot vs. subplot
The neuroscience of cause and effect, and why it matters
Best practices for narrative drive

Week Three: Goals and Motivations

Your characters’ goals and motivations are the nervous system of your novel, the part that connects plot to character. (It’s also responsible for sending those key signals to the reader that will allow them to follow the story.) Topics covered in week three of this course include:

Motivation and stakes
Conflict, challenge, and pacing
Action and reaction
Lower-order goals vs. higher-order goals
The neuroscience of desire—how understanding your character’s goals and motivations is key to your reader’s understanding of the story

Week Four: Bringing Your Novel to Life

In the final week of this program, we'll bring these three critical systems of your novel's anatomy together into a single document, an outline that will bring it to life--whether you're settling down to write your first draft or headed into a developmental revision. In this final week of the program, we'll cover:

How to create a fundamentally sound overall blueprint for your novel, regardless of what comes most naturally to you as a writer
Choosing the right plot for your character
Choosing the right character for your plot
Genre considerations
Multiple protagonists/POVs
Spontaneity vs. structure

Praise for Susan's Outline Coaching

"Wow, Susan. You've told my story back to me with more clarity and precision than I could have described it for myself - and so I can see what needs adjustment there. You got it. I'm practically crying :)"

- P. Kealey

"This is such helpful feedback - I'm amazed at how much you're already in the story with me.

I can't thank you enough - this is like gold."

- S. Brelvi

"I can't really describe adequately in words how grateful I am for your wisdom and guidance in helping me develop my novel."

-C. Yee

Praise for other classes

— Story Medicine —

"If you are a writer with a sincere desire to weave social justice issues and diverse characters into your fiction, this course is highly recommended!"

- D.L. Diener

“An invaluable how-to guide on conveying authentic emotion in fiction.”

- A.S. Gunn

“I am finding myself bringing to light beliefs that I have about the world that I've never been able to express. You’re allowing me to see that that's exactly what I need to write about. That there are others who may see themselves in my work and be acknowledged. That my book may free them to go off and change the world in ways that I could not.”

- T. Thayer

“Getting all the feels from this Story Medicine course. I’m so glad to have found it!”

-E. Rice

“The last few weeks have been so rough.... Rage. Despair. Gah. I've thought more than once, why write when the world is on fire? And yet, that's exactly when and why we must write, right?!?!?! If you need a boost, I highly recommend checking out the offerings of Susan DeFreitas. The four interviews in her master class are light-your-work-on-fire inspiring. Ditto the full course Story Medicine: Better Stories for a Better World, which I thought was just terrific."

-J. Langdon

“I registered for Story Medicine back in October and I'm LOVING IT!!! In fact, I submitted a short story for an anthology call. The story is very strong because of your course. I'm proud of it and hope it gets accepted. I'll keep you posted!"

-K.A. Phillips

About Your Instructor

An American of Indo-Guyanese descent, Susan DeFreitas is the author of the novel Hot Season, which won a Gold IPPY Award, and the editor of Dispatches from Anarres: Tales in Tribute to Ursula K. Le Guin, a finalist for the Foreword INDIES. Her work has been featured in the Writer’s Chronicle, LitHub, Story, Daily Science Fiction, Portland Monthly, and High Desert Journal, among other journals and anthologies. An independent editor and book coach, she specializes in helping writers from historically marginalized backgrounds, and those writing socially engaged fiction, break through into publishing. She divides her time between Santa Fe, New Mexico, and Portland, Oregon.

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